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Believe .:my first song:. by !zizinma:iconzizinma:



!!!read comment before reading lyrics!!!

Believe

I've always spent my time looking down, not up.
Always thinking that this life was just so rough.
Everytime I would try to climb,
something would alsways pull me down.

I made some promises I kenw I couldn't keep.
And the hurt always made me loose so much sleep.
Sometimes it was so sad,
I would just cry.

But there was a man who always knew what to do
And to this day, I still know it true.
He said,

You've gotta believe boy,
now don't give up.
I know it sounds hard but you gotta keep rollin'!
Yea, i've been there before,
and I know what your going through.
Don't worry, that crash was not your fauld,
and the girl of yours was no freind at all!
So you just gotta believe in yourself.
Like I believe in you.
©2008-2009 !zizinma
:iconzizinma:

Author's Comments

I made this song at about 12 o'clock midnight so it might be a little shakey (plus i had to work for 10 hours today from 6 a.m. to 6:30ish p.m.) but i did touch it up a bit.

no these arn't actual event that happen to the kid in the song it just seemed to fit.

the song was originally going to be like this kind of song [link] or this kind [link] (just click play on the site)

i like these two types of music, but i never would have expected it to come out as a country song ^^; oh well, i like it. plz comment!

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:iconcrystalchakra:
*sniff* *sniff* aww Zizinma! :hug: It touched my heart! lol

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Be the type of girl, that when you wake up the in the morning the Devil will say, "Aw shit she's up!"
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:iconzizinma:
honestly, i almost started when i wrote it... but *sniff* i gotta keep up my *sniff* manlyness... :cries: ah damit! *continues bawling* lol

so does this mean you likes it?

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I missed you, but my aim is impoving!
SNIPER! :sprint:
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My name is Ichigo Montoya, you killed my father... BANKAI!!!
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[link] :gallery:
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And what ever you do! dont click here!![link]
:iconcrystalchakra:
^^ That was touching though. I thinky ou should right poems and songs. Seems like your forte^^

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Be the type of girl, that when you wake up the in the morning the Devil will say, "Aw shit she's up!"
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:iconkumaroha:
well worded but (sorry)needs a little more realisim for your first song:hmm:

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I believe in Jesus Christ as my Savior.If you do too and aren\\\'t scared to admit it, then copy & paste this in your signature

:jsenn:No matter who you are ,or what you've become I will protect you with every breath I have,This I swear.:jsenn:Momentai
:iconzizinma:
but what about drawing and defeating my enemys in halo adn TAKING OVER THE WORLD!!! :mwahaha: lol

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I missed you, but my aim is impoving!
SNIPER! :sprint:
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:gallery:[link] :gallery:
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Please read the lyrics to my first song! [link]
:iconzizinma:
y? i dont think toby keith had a dog named "old yeller." and im pretty shure, in reality, not a single rapper ever got laid before they wrote those disgusting songs!

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I missed you, but my aim is impoving!
SNIPER! :sprint:
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:gallery:[link] :gallery:
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Please read the lyrics to my first song! [link]
:iconkumaroha:
you'd be suprised also old yellar is known world round

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I believe in Jesus Christ as my Savior.If you do too and aren\\\'t scared to admit it, then copy & paste this in your signature

:jsenn:No matter who you are ,or what you've become I will protect you with every breath I have,This I swear.:jsenn:Momentai
:iconcrystalchakra:
Thank can be your forte too!^^:w00t:

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Be the type of girl, that when you wake up the in the morning the Devil will say, "Aw shit she's up!"
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:iconzizinma:
um... waht? all i said was i doubt he had a dog named old yeller. it was in one of his songs and he didnt have 3 diferent marages.

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I missed you, but my aim is impoving!
SNIPER! :sprint:
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:gallery:[link] :gallery:
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Please read the lyrics to my first song! [link]

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